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You helped me up when I was down
You were the one who took away the frown
You hugged me and said it was all right
But are you really doing this for me?

When the tears were fresh on my face
When I felt like a horrible disgrace
When I was so scared I was shaking
Where were you when I needed you?

Sometimes you make me feel not cool enough
Not good enough, not sweet enough, not for you
I felt left out of your world and in the dark
Not confident enough, not pretty enough, that too.

It’s almost like you don’t know me at all
Somehow I’m on both sides of the wall
I’m only one person but I have two lives
Why can’t you accept me for who I am?

When I’m with you I have to wear a mask
I have to be careful about the things you ask
I can’t be who I truly am, the girl I am in inside
Why can’t I answer it like I would with others?

Sometimes you make me feel not cool enough
Not good enough, not sweet enough, not for you
I felt left out of your world and in the dark
Not confident enough, not pretty enough, that too.

I’ll be waiting for the day when we all will change
We won’t think anything anyone does is strange
But for now I’ll accept you for who are
Who cares if I’m not me you’ve made me a star
©2007-2009 ~forleafclovgrl
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Author's Comments

Sometimes with some of my friends I feel like I have to change because I'm not "cool" enough or I have to hide things from them. Not a big deal, just felt like I needed to write a poem/song. I did a weird rhyming thing but as a song I think it'll be ok. Enjoy ... :star:!!

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:iconpink-striped-socks:
This is a very well written and structured piece. It drew me in immediately. Well done on such a beautifully written piece. You are quite the talented one. :D

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..And roped me in..so mesmerizing, hypnotizing..I am captivated..

..Faith & Courage..

.Pink.Striped.Socks.Messed.Up.Hair.Ribbons.To.Make.It.Pretty.
:iconmagicaljoey:
It is very well written, and I enjoyed reading it immensly :)
Well done :hug:

The topic is very interesting....it might acually have inspired my muse, but we shall see about that :P
:iconcreativepoet:
wow very strong this poem!^^ good job!

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~Poetry is the door to my soul.~

~ La poésie est la porte de mon âme~
:iconangeloftears:
I personally liked how you emphasized things by not having the rhyme and by making them into a question. As an added bonus, by keeping that consistent it all tied together nicely.

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It's not the shadows that lurk in the dark that you should fear...but the shadows that lurk in your own mind.

Interesting, the things our brains tell themselves in order for us to survive to see another day.

There's no rest for the wicked.- Anon
:icontenri:
:) Good job, here.

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"And the universe just vanished out of sight,
And all the stars collapsed behind the pitch black night."

Warmer Climate - Snow Patrol
:iconichigoedinuyasha:
I hope I'm not one of those friends!!!!! :glomp: I really like this.....AH!! NO!! NOT ANOTHER SONG!!!! :fork:

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Come my children, let us destroy the world.

You fat tub of lard, go fry yourself. Do it...now...do it.

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:iconforleafclovgrl:
No, you aren't. Nancy dear you do know YOU don't have to change everyone of these into songs. I write them because I feel like it, only write them if you feel like it too.

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Love is like a four leaf clover: hard to find but lucky to have.
:iconforleafclovgrl:
Thank you!!!

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Love is like a four leaf clover: hard to find but lucky to have.
:iconforleafclovgrl:
Thank you so much!!!

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Love is like a four leaf clover: hard to find but lucky to have.
:iconforleafclovgrl:
Thank you ... :hug:

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Love is like a four leaf clover: hard to find but lucky to have.

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