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Trust me, I'm Not Perfect by ~forleafclovgrl:iconforleafclovgrl:





Many friends and classmates

Teachers and counselors too

Have more faith and trust in me

Than my parents, the two of you



You’re never really satisfied

And perfect I can’t be

What do I have to do

To make the both of you see?



My heart breaks a bit more

When I see you doubt what I say

I’m just going to a friend’s house

But at home you make me stay



You’re always so suspicious

You never trusted me

Going through all my stuff

I just want privacy



I’m winning all these trophies

I’m a straight A student too

But you still aren’t all that happy

And more and more I have to do





A teacher once pulled me out of class

And told me to be strong

He was afraid of what I might do

And told me what was wrong



He knew I was under pressure

He knew what I was going through

But all those tears I had cried

Of that he also knew



What’s sad isn’t the grades

It’s when kids finally crack

From the heavy weight of stress

Committing suicide, never looking back



Those wise words hit me hard

He understood my fears

Yet he hadn’t known me long

And you have for fourteen years



Be proud and be satisfied

I’m as perfect as I can be

Just give some freedom

With my friends I’ll be happy
©2007-2010 ~forleafclovgrl
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Author's Comments

yay my emotions have decided to write a new poem!!

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:iconcadencedwaters:
Wow. This is really good. Judging from this poem (it's the only one I have read of yours, so far) I can tell you have a good way with words. Keep up the good work.
:iconxthorndancerx:
Very nicely done!! I really like it just as much as your other ones! :headbang:

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You say anything you want about me as you please, but I am what I am and thats something you can never be.

A crooked smile with a twisted mind,

><Thorn><
:icontenri:
That's exactly how I feel sometimes. You captured the emotion really well.

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"And the universe just vanished out of sight,
And all the stars collapsed behind the pitch black night."

Warmer Climate - Snow Patrol
:icondespairinspired:
So true

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~wackiest ~ the 'Artist' me, if you like crap, have a look. Or if not, have a look at my more poetic side ~despairinspired
:iconichigoedinuyasha:
YAY!! :D This is really good as usual. If you commit suicide, I might come after you....do you want me to die too??? :hug: LIVE AND BE STRONG!! SO MANY PEOPLE WANT TO READ YOUR POEMS!!!!! :D

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Come my children, let us destroy the world.

You fat tub of lard, go fry yourself. Do it...now...do it.

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:iconx0theoneandonly0x:
This is great. My parents are just like that. Nothing I do is ever good enough. They want me to be perfect. And personally, I don't think anyone actually can be.

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RAWR!
:iconbep-anne:
*crys* i pose i'm one of the lucky ones my mums great.... lets not talk about dad...

*hugs*
:iconforleafclovgrl:
Thank you so much!! :hug:

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Love is like a four leaf clover: hard to find but lucky to have.
:iconheartbreakkim:
damn. Thats brilliant, word perfect

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I don't smoke, I don't drink, I don't do drugs - But I do lie.
:iconbeautifully-broken89:
This is amazing. And thank you for your comment. I find the whole VT Massacre devastating. I know so many people who were effected by it. I am glad that you could feel that through the poem.

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